Reflection

1.      Ivy & Zoe

Our stand points aren't opposing enough. We have to strength our idea and make them more extreme. As for myself, I have to search more academic articles from some authoritative people as my reference. Because my annotation 1 and annotation 2 couldn't convince readers strongly, if I choose a movie to support my idea, the all papers finished in the end of semester will be weak. As a result, I decide that I still choose a movie to support my stand point. However, I will give up an annotation I wrote before, and write a new annotation of a more academic article from the authoritative people. Besides, I have to notice the author’s background. The former annotation I wrote didn't introduce the author very well and clear. Only the reader can understand the author’s background, they can trust my annotation and analysis. As for my annotation about a movie, I have to emphasize on the conversation of the move.

2.      Ruby & Emma

I regard that Ruby’s idea about finding someone who really had abortion, and asking the influence of the abortion is great. Because it can make her stand point much stronger and convinced. However, I think it will be a little difficult to find such a girl who is willing to share her experience. After all, the girl who had abortion may, in fact, want to forget this kind of experience. So Ruby has to get through this problem. But if she can get through, this article will be perfect and wonderful.

3.      Kevin & Alice

Their respective stand point is certain, and their issue is really appropriate. In this century, how to use internet very well and protect our own information in the same time is a good question which is hard to solve. However, because this kind of issue is general and has many details. So they have to try to mainly focus on some points so that their papers won’t be too wide and we can clearly understand what they really want to say. Or they can find some specific examples or theories or researches which can directly point out their issue.

4.      Cassie & 學長

They are really good. No matter in the issue or the annotation, they can directly catch the most important point. Their annotations have chosen the article from the authoritative authors, and it is what I have to learn now.

5.      Perly & Joanne

Their issue is close to anyone of us. Most of people had thought of this issue when we were in senior high or junior high. However, that is because their issue is easy for everyone to think, they have to make their papers have more details that is not easy for others to think about. But, as so far, their annotations had done really well and were specific. It’s good.